Your love is like a glass of wine
it's always less than I ask for,
its always more than I deserve,
your love is like the ring on my finger
I am embellished
by its glint,
It is admired
now and again,
It may not be commemorated
at all times,
but I will be incomplete,
with a void
if it's lost..
Nice poetry. Like the first three lines.
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thanks :)
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ReplyDeleteI have been quite lazy of late as far as far as reading blogs is concerned. Which means I am also not appreciating good work such as yours as often as I should be. Apologies!
hahaha.. thanks a lot for reading.. do read the other posts too :)
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