At midnight, I lie on my bed,
All soaked, all drenched,
In the tears of the past
I lay awake and contemplate
I wonder and regret
About the deeds of the past
She sits by my side
While my tears, I hide
And we talk about the past
We weep and we cry
Until the tears go dry
Cognizing the past
She pats my back
As our pains slack
And we learn from the past
We soak no more
Our ships set ashore
And we leave behind the past.
beautiful......
ReplyDeleteloved it sanhita.
anu
Thanks anu :)). Keep reading..
ReplyDeleteI loved it. It is simple and full of emotions. Very well penned!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Saru :)
ReplyDeleteGreat ending Sanhita! Soak no more in the sad dreams of the past. Well written.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sabyasachi :)
Deletereally liked it a lot..hope to transform it into a beautiful song sumday..obviously with your permission..!!
DeleteLoved this one. :) Esp the way you ended it.
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DeleteYes i will, for sure.
Deep. Sad. Beautifully expressed.
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Visit mine sometime. :)
Thanks a lot :)). i will for sure :)
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Thanks a lot. I'm elated. It will be treasured :)
ReplyDeleteTears always have a healing effect and yet we tend to hold them back. Beautifully expressed Sanhita.
ReplyDeleteTHANKS..and yes true that :)
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