When I stepped out of my cocoon last year, I wanted to create a beautiful life... for myself and for other people like me - smart, intelligent, but unhappy, unfulfilled, unsatisfied, their potentials never tapped into, their hearts smashed every time they typed on their laptops and looked at the clock. Time passes by for them and nothing happens. Or everything happens but just by the clock. Money buys them expensive shoes but where was the time to step out? Every conversation was a game of poker where you bet or you call but you can never fold. It's been a year now. I fear I may have failed. I didn't create the world I promised myself and my invisible readers. What am I doing? My life only got worse. There were places to go to but where were the expensive shoes? Fear, trapped me in an invisible cage I carried with me everywhere I went. My neck strangled by a stranger's hands of expectations. How could I stand up to his expectations when I can't even stand up to my own? ...
hello ,it was gooood,though i don't know much abt poetry.had written once only till now...lol.
ReplyDeletegr8 going.
thanks Triza :) Keep reading and do write more :)
ReplyDeleteQuite intense :-)
ReplyDeletethanks for observing :)
ReplyDeletevery intense poem ...loved it
ReplyDeleteThanks TTT! :)
ReplyDeleteheart touching poem sanhita....
ReplyDeletedeeply expressed thought.
anu
Kudos...that's the spirit! And I loved this piece :))
ReplyDeleteThanks anu and Panchali.. such comments always encourage me. :)
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